Tuesday, March 27, 2007

Tell me what you think

of these two poems by a 19-year old Barack Obama.

1 comment:

Unknown said...

The first one has some valid presence of the poet in it. I believed it for a while. But it loses energy about half way through. Phrases like, "to which he replied" drag it down. The second one is silly; I don't believe it. But for a 19-year-old, they're not bad.